Fallen Flower
By: JackenJill_
Drama/Action
Taglish
Disclaimer: I am not a professional critic.
All details are just my opinion. I might be wrong; I might be right. I just provide A PERSPECTIVE that may help you improve your story. Kung paniniwalaan mo man o hindi, susundin mo o hindi, kaiinisan mo or hindi, ay depende na sa'yo.
Warning: The following contains word/s, phrases, sentences, or paragraphs that may or may not hurt you. Please read at your own risk.
Note: I apologize inabot na'to ng February 2021. Sobrang tagal mo naghintay. Pasensya na talaga. I have no excuse. Pero sana makatulong pa rin ito sa story mo. Maraming salamat!
Legend:
🏅 - 👍 or ❤️
💤 - 👎
🏳️ - suggestions or corrections
🏅The combination of words is simple but sufficiently inviting. Plus, it is short yet rememberable.
🏅Appealing enough. Wala naman na ako ibang masabi. Readable naman ang written characters and all the elements come together. [Also, ang ganda ni Bae Suzy!]