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So let's begin with the title, your story unlike any other historical fiction wattpad stories with a female protagonist; portrays a smart, assertive and valiant personality of Queen Estelle Valerie Devereux. Needless to say, I personally find the title quite intimidating and well suited with respect to the characterization of your plot. The cover however is a bit let down to the likes of your book, I would suggest opting for a cover that would bring out the title of the book just as elegantly as the structure of your writing is.
Not every book out in the historical fiction genre has the built of an old english style of writing, which I find quite impressive in your book. Not only are you bold enough to adapt the language in your book but also meticulous so as to ensure you don't slip up. The amount of detailed attention that you've given to your words and sentence framing is quite impressive. Though, there are a few grammatical errors that all of us can't really avoid, nothing serious but, a few missing commas here and there, which if rectified could really increase the professionalism of your writing.
Right from the first chapter of your story, we are given a glimpse through the life of Queen Estelle who is to be bethroed to the crowned Prince Rafael, the bond that they create throughout the journey is very compelling and it keeps you invested as and how the story goes on. From innocent smiles to sarcastic teasing and trauma to hearty laughs your book has a good flow of emotions which takes the reading to another level. It's really disappointing to find that many books now a days totally mess up these aspects, but you've got it just right. Every gesture that your characters display, reflects a figment of their personalities or have meaning to convey, which gives them life and makes the story more believable.
Personally, I like the character of your protagonist, her outspoken persona has me in, I can't really say the same about Prince Rafael, sure he is charming and fun, but the lack of elegance of that of a crowned prince is detectable at few points. I would suggest if you could put in a few scenes wherein the dutiful, sincere and regal qualities of his personality could stand out without clashing with his cheerfulness.
Throughout, all the books that I've read on this platform, I really feel the need to say that your book stands out to be one of the most well written books that I've come across and I myself enjoyed reading it. I would suggest using some app for your minimal grammatical errors. And also if you are willing there's a lot of people on wattpad who would be able to help you with the cover, we ourselves could provide you some options, that is only if you want. Also don't let the less number of reads put you down, you have a good potential and you, my dear should most definitely keep writing.
