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“Thank You, Next”.
Oh My lord! Woman (Ariande) you have done a great job! Trust me, I enjoyed the roller coaster of emotions that you put me through. Honestly, I am kind of biased with your book because I found it relatable and, I like Ariana and Taylor very much, so I am going to be biased with whatever I say about your book, I'm warning ya!!.
At first, your title couldn't get me through what you wanted to portray but, when I read your first chapter, I knew exactly what it was that you wanted to express so kudos to that! Coming back to your cover, it could be better because your story and your cover don't go hand in hand. I suggest you to look up for better ones. There are many platforms that will provide you with that. And for your grammar, I honestly did not notice any mistakes since I was too engrossed in your story and, I must say a very good job done in just 10 chapters. It had all: a journey through a person's love to self-love and the title of each chapter went along really well to the context of it, plus you have a good playlist!
I would like to say that you did a pretty good justification to your title. Its like you explained, the song really went well with words and you have put in just right amount of emotions that are needed because, I could feel them all. I would also like to add that your book would do wonders if you add characters and aesthetics to it. I was just let down by the blurb of your story, try to reconstruct it in a better way because your matter is good.
So far with characters, I definitely like Sophie. I liked how she was trying to fight so many emotions and the way that she realized her self-worth that maybe that guy wasn't worth of what she was giving since as he clearly wasn't reciprocating what she felt. I like that she found her idea of love was too pure to be wasted on people who do not care about her, love had been a very powerful and meaningful word to her as she knew what it represented but, when she really thought about it with him it never existed. I hope you keep writing because I definitely want to see what comes along towards the end.
