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Let's get started. Though pretty common, I must say the title of the book is quite catchy. It very precisely hints at the plot of your story, I find it to be very direct yet it does justice to your fan-fiction. I like how you have used a wonderfully cheerful BTS photograph as your cover with just the right font to make it interestingly cute.
Personally, I think that the blurb could've been a lot more intriguing and attractive. I understand that the BTS theme itself would draw in the fans together though, a little improvement as in including some kind of emotional cliffhanger could really make a huge difference. From the first chapter itself, I could see that you have a lot of sentences beginning with “I”, honestly, at a point it got a bit irritating. What I mean to tell you is that constant use of repetitive words in the beginning of sentence dull the impression of a book. Throughout, the first few chapters, I could feel as though instead of portraying, you were narrating the events that happened. Especially with the flashback in the first chapter, when a character lives through a past memory in the form of flash backs it need not be narrated but it should've been displayed as of present. It makes the reader actually experience the reality of the story. Now-a-days, I find this happening with a lot of writers so it's not that big of a deal but if you do want to really improve then I suggest you should check them.
The character of Zoey is that of a self-made rich and an independent woman which I really found very appealing. Instead of putting her off as some stereotypical timid girl you have given her power and I must say she carries it well. The BTS boys are genuinely sweet, sincerely caring and the ideal gentlemen kind. Though, I would've liked it a lot more if they had some intensity to their characters as in description wise.
Honestly, I found your book to be enjoyable and fun and I really think you should keep writing.
