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I personally liked your title “Matter of Heart: Friendship vs Love” I must say pretty controversial, huh? I've done my theories and researches with this kind of romance vs bromance. It's pretty cool but your cover doesn't suit your title very well, I suggest you could make you cover a bit more interesting for your readers.
The blurb seems pretty okay but, it fails to intrigue me as to what is there in your story. I mean, when I read your last chapter and then your blurb, I found that they don't go hand in hand maybe as the story progresses, it may cover all the aspects but, I personally suggest you to not completely change but improvise or work a bit more on that aspect.
The hooks had me in, I found them interesting which means you know the art of making people curious as to what might be up next which I'm happy about but, I suggest you to try to keep your chapter a bit long, they are too short, it's like you are not telling a story but you are narrating an incident from your personal experience which is okay but, I suggest you to make it more story-like, your grammar is so far good, as for punctuation, they are on right places but, I suggest you to improvise your sentence formation too.
I liked your characters carefree and chill, I loved the bond between Miasha and Shreya, it's very cool and especially the roommate things that they have going are pretty comical and interesting. Besides, I want to tell you that your sentence formation feels a bit ordinary so do try to improvise it, I don't mean to let you down, it's your first book and I thought about directly pointing out these things since I clearly see that you have a potential ahead so do keep writing and updating.
