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Mala by mimirathod

Mala by mimirathod

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♣Review♣

“Mala” the title of the book is simple and appropriate for a short story book. The cover though I thought needs a bit addition of bright colors. As they are short stories, I would sum it all up. Firstly, I must say your use of adjectives while describing the scenes or any particular object is quite intriguing and beautiful. It helps make the scene more realistic and easy to grasp as of what is happening.

Being short stories, your introduction to every new story was quite adapting. You tried introducing some different stories to your readers that was beautiful but the endings were a bit confusing and abrupt. Your writing skills are very up to mark. Reading so far, I did not find any major grammatical mistakes or spelling mistakes. Your detailed writing, be it describing about beauty of the nature or emotion of human being is wonderful. You really have great potential because that kind of writing skill is difficult to achieve and maintain it. And my dear you have achieved and maintained it well. A bit working on the story plot and the ending would bring the book in a very different lime light. Hope to see more of your books.

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                             (The Truthful Inkers)

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