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It's not always that I come across such uniquely crafted titles that perfectly embody the soul of the story. Black night gleaming with a shadow of sophistication married to a sharply bold and wavy font just brings out the classic aura of thriller and mystery which is in fact slightly in contrast to the deeply engaging love affair which you've installed in your book. I think a cover that portrays the wicked humor along with the sensational drama and heartfelt longing in just one single glance would be the perfect fit to attract the audience seeking the books of your genre.
Though, I also believe that the descriptive blurb could do a lot better with a little more body into it, by this I mean that though the blurb is short and to the point, it's missing the factor which makes me actually intrigued enough to read the book. If only you could subtly bring out the aspect which sets your book different from the rest by giving in a little peek inside the mind of the protagonists, I'd say that could make a huge difference. With all the emotions of an ongoing heartbreak poured out into a simple worded conversation that leaves behind a trail of complicated misconceptions, your prologue has quite the potential to capture the readers right since the very beginning.
The writing style is very casual yet fairly detail oriented with all the necessary ailments adding up-to create a well imaginative story. The lead characters - Diego and Sarah, both have uniquely profound personalities that changes shades as the plot unveils. It's fairly amusing to see them go through series of wonders and mishaps as they try to keep up their charade of playing truce.
The best things that I find when writing a story is- the sheer passion with which the author drives to make fit of the every single word with precision. And I'm really glad that I could find that aspect sewn into the chapters of your story.
