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The title "Lost once more" is catchy but the cover doesn't justify the title and is a bit let down. A good combination of colors and background picture would help the cover get a new look. Sophie the female lead is strong and knows what would her decision result in, and she is also ready to face them. Though, the scenes explained are a bit confusing, if you want to keep it that way, then it's okay. But if the first few chapters itself are very confusing then it takes away the readers will to read further.
The writing style that you have adapted is simple and you have maintained it well. The thought process was well explained. I couldn't see many spelling mistakes but found some grammatical ones. More of, the arrangement of words were a bit a drift.
There were only two chapters so, all I could say after reading them was that the plot seemed good but you should find a balance between what should be reveled and what should be kept a mystery. And a good orientation of words would help understand the plot well.
