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The title “Burning Deceits”, it's beautiful I personally found it quiet intriguing and well suiting to your mystery story as portrayed, though the cover could have been better as per the title it doesn't exactly resemble the idea that you would want to portray, I won't say that its substandard but it could be a lot better.
Well I found the blurb of your story quiet interesting it makes you want to actually know that what is in your mystery book and it makes a reader very interested to look up into your mystery story and also I was quiet satisfied with your grammatical skills some spellings and small errors can be neglected but kudos to your grammar!
The thing that concerns me was you switching between flashbacks and reality, I suggest improvising it or make it better because as a reader I found the switches very confusing between past, present and end so it would be great if you could go through them and as and when you write try to make things a bit more descriptive and make your characters carry a bit more intense emotions of good as well as the bad so that it keeps the reader hooked to your book.
About Ava and Winter, Ava coming out about her life was very bold and them acting as perfect comrades even though she tried to attack her was making me more invested and keen to read your book. Personally, I think that apart from first 8 chapters the back and forth flow of your book was impressive and interesting.
The suspense concerns and mystery of your story has been put up quiet well though I wasn't able to get many hooks because of the transitions I think that you should clarify the order of the flashbacks but apart from that I must admit its written well and as for the cover; on our platform, there are many that do provide it too as a matter of fact you would just have to fill up the form and your request will be well-received. Anyways, I hope you keep writing as its written. It's your 1st book and for that, I must say its pretty impressive.
