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The broken glasses ebbed into the corners of your cover truly heighten the appeal of your book. I like the font that you have used with your title, it provides the perfect image of a mystery and thriller novel. Your title “Dark side” has a certain kind of horrific beauty to it that I found quite compelling. Needless to say that both your title and the cover are up to the mark.
The riveting combinations of the adjectives that you have included into your synopsis while defining the characters was what really pulled me in, though, I faced with a lot of difficulties in coming to terms with your writing style. I understand that you have adopted a simple speech in writing but there were times that I found your words to be quite confusing and that threw me off a little. I couldn't find a common ground through which I could relate to your story.
Your plot, however, intrigued me right from the beginning. I really found myself wanting to know the cause of Oliver's death. Right from the very first chapter though, I was quite perplexed with the amount of characters that played out in the scenes. I mean I get it that you have 13 characters in all but I would've had created some sort of impressions with each character that I could identify them from. It's not to say that you start briefing about each one of them but certain personality traits mingled with their physical aspects would do just great.
I think that the grammar and punctuation part in your book seems quite amiss. I see this happening with a lot of writers today and it's not very uncommon. Though, I suggest that you should use some kind of app to help you improvise.
The efforts that you have put in to create the trailer and the aesthetics truly increase the hype of your story. I think that you can actually write quite well, you just need some improvisations while dealing with dialogues and descriptions. I suggest that you do some research and read a few books of your genre to get the hang of it.
