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“The Skulls”.
Certainly, I like the uniqueness of your title, it's ambiguity is very intriguing. The cover is a perfect match to your title as well as your story, I am happy about the aesthetics and the characters too, it really shows the amount of efforts that you have put in so, well done! Also, the power and strength that your title and cover hold, especially the names of your character's, they are all very impressive.
The blurb is pretty straightforward but it would really do great with a bit of improvisation. Your book is surely worth the read, so I think you should remove 'The plead' that you have put in your blurb and instead just try to improvise it because your book has so many elements that are fascinating, I suggest use them to your advantage to attract readers. The hooks of your book are particularly very interesting it makes the reader more keen to read and want to know about the next chapter. I've also noticed that you put up daily updates. It is a pretty good thing to keep the flow going and have the readers engaging!
I have read many mafia books but I like the power that your book holds. That matched with your splendid female protagonist; does wonders. I like how powerful, smart and confident she is in fact, I like all the characters in your story, everyone has their own appealing individuality. A few scenes from your plot involved proper mafia torture, underground fighting and teenage drama, kudos to your imagination and writing style, it its very seraphic and makes the reader imagine the story so well done on that!
The grammar and spellings do need a bit of attention along with some commas here and there, I would suggest using an app for that. Besides that, I would like to point out a few things; I couldn't understand how Seth, being so smart did not recognize Alexander's voice because the character that Seth portrays is sharp-witted and vigilant so, if you could change this or put something else like a mystery of some sort here it would be great. Also, as a reader I would like to see some underground fights or bids that happen in mafia world as you have already put fighting so might as well make it bit more intriguing. Besides that, I like how simple the love story between Xia and Seth is kept, not a lot of drama there so certainly your book is not a cliche, which is wonderful and it clearly holds more potential. Keep writing my dear, this being your first book, you've done a quite good job with your spirited imagination.
