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"16 long years" I think your title itself is pretty intriguing and it certainly has a good element of suspense. Your cover is not bad either but I think you should improvise it because your writing content has potential and if you are willing there are many platforms to provide covers and aesthetics.
I felt that the blurb is too short for the story, no doubt it's interesting but, you could elaborate it a bit more while including the supernatural qualities and strength about your characters which would intrigue your readers more. I must say; you have done a good job with your hooks, it proved that you truly possess the art of keeping your readers on edge for what's next. The tags could have been better because you certainly have interesting characters and elements in your book and it would really help more readers discover your work.
I suggest you to use some app for the grammatical errors and check your sentence formation since it will help you to improvise your book. I think that you have done a great job with choosing your characters and the suspense that is added to their roles makes it even more thrilling to read. Assuming that it's the first one you've written, your story is truly impressive. Keep Writing!
