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Let's get started! The Gothic style of the title fascinated me right since the beginning, that coupled with your beautifully structured blurb had completely and utterly blown me away. The paraphrasing, the subtle hints with just the right amount of intrigueness embedded into the blurb, just did it's magic!
Though, I could catch the semblance of the idea that you wanted to portray through the cover, I suggest you look for better options since the most significant aspect that pursues the reader to read your story is cover and the blurb, and while you have most definitely done a fabulous job with the blurb, I think it's only wise that the cover fits the criteria too.
I really like how you have taken your time with words, explaining every single detail; be it a playful nudge or a soulful glance with just the right amount of attention without creating boredom by surpassing the ideal length of the chapters. The well constructed hooks that you have put in every nook of your plot just heightens the thrill and excitement throughout the journey. Needless to say, it is suffice to describe just how vigorous and engaging your writing style is.
The characters and aesthetics at the beginning of the story are all well put however, I found your trailer to be a bit vague and poorly constructed. By this I mean that the scenes in them were quite off color and lacked the compelling nature of your story. I suggest that you find someone to help you with this and create a trailer equally thrilling and intriguing just the way your writing is.
Krystal, is quite an unusual character. She possess a certain power and dominance with the way she behaves around with others, her highly unyielding, undoubtedly stubborn and rigid boldness captures the readers just as they step into her world. Carter, the supposed mystery boy with devilishly handsome looks, equally charming persona and an unwavering dark personality is thoroughly investing. I like how you have given a distinct impression to each and every one of your character which makes it easy for the readers to relate to the story and travel through the whirlwind of emotions just as you would've wanted them too.
Personally, I am not a fan of Vampire Diaries nor am I a fan of Devil's Inc, but your story has a certain compelling aura to it that just sucks me right into it. You have great potential in you and trust me when I say that: your story deserves to be known.
