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Let's begin with your cover, honestly, your cover doesn't portray the persona that your book does, but I'm sure with some help you will be able to find a good cover for your book. I liked your title “Embrace”, it was the reason why I wanted to read your book, you have done really well with the title.
The blurb of your book is very long and its not framed properly, so I suggest you to improve that, I mean you need not keep so much space between your lines or paragraphs in general. The blurb, inspite of the errors, is very interesting, it makes me want to know more about your characters. Personally, I find them cute, and they have a good spark in them, but I suggest you to read more books of the same genre so that you could get a more clear idea as to how the flow of the book should've been.
Honestly, I'm not a fan of BTS, so I couldn't connect to your characters much, but yes you have done a well job with writing since I could get a rough idea as to what are you trying to portray. I suggest putting in more intensifying emotions and framing sentences in a bit more seraphic way. Your characters and aesthetics are beautiful and very appealing so well done. I suggest you to pay a bit more attention on your grammatical skills so that it will help you to strengthen your sentence formation, you could also use an app for that purpose.
Jungkook and Taehyung, have an amazing chemistry, the glances shared between them can just say quite enough. The way they are immersed into the deep emotions, the purity of their feelings towards one another without realizing that they have something so pure was very nice. Overall, I see that you have a good potential for writing, if you consider the errors mentioned above and improvise, you will do great!
