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♣Review♣
So let's get through it, The title is short, unique and catchy that intrigues the reader as of what the book has in store for them after having read the title. But I can't say the same about the cover. A cover with a good set of colors, pictures and text attracts audience the most.
Speaking about the character, the bonding between the sisters is very lovely. The humor that you tried inculcating into the conversation has done quite the job. Since it's a short story, I can't say much on the character development part. The essence of teenage romance that you combined with your great humor is very appealing for the readers. Your writing style is simple and I didn't find any spelling mistakes as well!
I would suggest enriching your writing by using good amount of adjectives. That would help get a better view at things. Putting a little bit more descriptions of the surrounding and background and even the character's persona would be delightful.
I must say you have got a good sense of humor and you must keep exploring, writing and learning.
