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The simplicity with which you have created the cover makes it a true beauty. It is in every way absolutely interesting and gives away the idea that you would want to convey to your readers. The title “Hold onto me” is sensually intriguing but at the same time holds a certain kind of desperation which really pursued me to go on with your book.
I understand that your writing style is simple and believe me; you've carried it well throughout the chapters, not once was it out of place, though, the lack of double quotes at the end of every dialogue irritated me quite a bit. I faced a lot of issues with understanding where the dialogues began and ended. I suggest that you take a serious look at it because it affects the readability of your content very drastically.
I liked how you've maintained a constant flow of writing without over flooding it with vague words. It was simple and direct. But since your book falls within the young adult genre, I would've had more descriptions like physical appearances, outlay of the surroundings and most importantly the emotional aspect, just to heighten the experience, have your reader imagine the story with a clear understanding. You've done a good job with the blurb, it's precisely short and to the point.
I hope you understand that since I could read only 3 chapters, I won't be able to say much about the characters or the plot but, I think that; with some improvisations your book could do exceedingly well so keep writing and improving!
