31] Ravenous √

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Ravenous by SuperSam112.

Ravenous by SuperSam112

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♣Review♣

Honestly, I really have nothing in this review but appreciation for your beautifully enthralling story. I was immensely mesmerized by your writing, I must say you have an art to have your readers stunned with the quality of your content. I thoroughly enjoyed your book. You have put so much effort to not only think about your title and cover but your characters as well. At first, I truly couldn't get the idea behind your cover but after having read the book, I get the feel. 

I liked your blurb, it's very well written, honestly, it was the reason that made me want to actually keep going with the book. The writing had been very well since you've described each and every detail so perfectly that I felt like I was actually living at the moment in your world. I am a big fan of fantasy novels and I must say that you my dear did not let the expectations down. To be able to see this turn into a movie would be seriously amazing!

Dylan fit well to the role that you have put him in, a normal boy shockingly discovering all these magical powers which are completely unbeknownst to him. The bond shared between him and his grandmother is put out really well, the fairy land, unicorns, monkeys, monsters, I could actually feel like I'm living all of it. So far, I couldn't spot any grammatical errors so kudos to that! I'm  happy with the book and satisfied with your plot. All I can say now is that, 

Hooks: perfect,

Blurb: excellent,

Writing style: beautiful,

And the plot is also very intriguing. I liked the cover no doubt but I would suggest you to try and modify it more if you could. Anyways, I hope you continue writing your book and publish it into a real book someday because I really see great potential in you.

Keep writing and all the best!

Ratings (Out of five)

Cover
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Plot
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Writing style
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Grammar and spellings
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Overall
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

-by Kara
(The Truthful Inkers)

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