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The Chase. I must say that the title in itself gives a reader the feeling of adrenaline rush just as every chapter of your story does. Though, the cover is a bit let down when it comes to capturing attention, the red and black colors are so obscure that they blend in together without creating any contrast that could make your title stand out. I would suggest toning down on the loudness of the bright colors and using an extraordinary font that could thoroughly emphasize the boldness of your title.
Your writing style is simple and direct and though that is preferable when drafting a blurb, it's not that impactful when you use the same with developing the story line. The plot has its own distinct advantages as it keeps the readers hooked and keen for more and yours has a good amount of twists and turns that naturally brings out the curiosity! The story line revolves around about a lot of characters and having no unique aspect to match them with, it becomes difficult to decipher their true nature. Personally, I feel that the story has been narrated instead of being able to allow the readers to experience the intensity of the emotions or the full blown nitty-gritties of an action drama. I would suggest that you put in more body into it like make room for the characters to develop philosophically as they give out their views on the situations instead of just having jump from one scene to next, also the use of metaphors, body language and sensory details could really make a difference and allow the readers to connect with the book.
Overall, I think that you've got a wonderful story and you just need a proper way to portray it out on paper. Keep writing my dear, you've got a potential in you and if you strive to make the most out of it, I'm sure that you'll find... there's no one to stop you from achieving the best!
