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Foremost, the title “The only one- Park Jimin” is quite simple and just gives the right overview of the book, though, the cover could have been more interesting and creative since that's what's going to be the first step to engage the readers right away. Talking about the blurb; it's short and nice, the story goes on with a pretty flow with the budding friendship between Hanna and the seven guys.
The emotional bond that you wanted to portray among each one of them was beautiful and was described in a very satisfying manner.
The scenes induced with humor, their causal hangouts and crazy arguments, are together a jackpot for anyone looking for a lighthearted story.
It would have been more connecting, if the character development was described more clearly. I am not saying that it wasn't done well, but a bit more attention to level up the intensity of thought process or emotional aspects portrayed by taeyhung or other guys in first chapters would have hooked the readers right since the beginning. But if you wanted to keep it light and amusing then I think that it's fine too.
Besides, you do have good writing skills, all scenes were well written. The particular thing that struck me was that; inspite of the fact many characters were playing around at the same time, it wasn't confusing at any point as to who was saying what, you've done a good job with maintaining the balance between the dialogues. I suggest, adding a cliffhanger would just make it more appealing.
I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. You kept the writing simple and easy to read which truly is nice so do maintain it. Keep writing and learning and continue being funny as you already are!
