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To begin with, the title of the book “PUZZLES”, not only grips and excites but also puzzles the readers in its true sense! Speaking of the cover, it is quite interesting, though, a bit of improvisation with the font would help the cover really stand out. The blurb is short and appropriate, though there are some grammatical mistakes that could be corrected.
The story line is a good mixture of thrill and suspense. Just improving in the sentence formation and use of right words, adjectives would make all the wonders. The use of cliffhangers are also quite impressive, it really hooked me as of what lay ahead.
Your writing skill is good, but as I mentioned earlier that sentence formation is a very important aspect for a book to engage the readers and help to connect with the character so improvising there would really earn you some brownie points! The description of the mysterious bond between Y/N, Yuna and the guys in the beginning chapters is enthralling. The straight forward character of Y/N is quite notable.
As the story proceeds; the unraveling of the mystery and journey is well written and helps to make the scene come together right.
While laying down hints for suspense, it's important not to confuse the reader. Being specific of who you are taking about and about what, keeps the sync between the reader and the character. I came through some grammatical mistakes in the chapters too but found no spelling mistakes. Developing and improving will surely help your to gain more readers.
