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"Just an ordinary girl" as simple and sweet as your title is, your cover matches up to it well. Initially, I had thought that the cover might be a let down, but I am glad that I was proven wrong. Your cover gives an exact idea of what you want to portray to your readers. So well done with your cover and your title!
The blurb of your book is very interesting, I like that you have made it very intriguing for your readers, it not only describes what's in your story but also keeps a good amount of suspense which a lot of people usually fail at. The thing is, they don't put many efforts to make the blurb interesting therefore even if their story is good, readers may actually not go through with it because of the poor quality of blurb, so I think you have well done on that part.
The hooks that you have put in at the end of every chapter along with your author's note, makes the next chapter more interesting. I liked that you know how to write hooks and keep people keen on waiting for the next chapter. Honestly, I found your book a bit cliche bad boy and good girl, but I must say you have written it quite well with the proper touch of cockiness, innocence and romance. I like the way your characters are so comfortable around each other and you have also put in a good amount of teenage drama, so I must say it's a fun book to read.
I liked the character of Sebastian, carefree, cool and bold yet a mysterious guy. Generally, most of the stories revolve around bad boys these days, and I must say that I also like how he brings that annoying side of Avery. So far, you have maintained a good chemistry between them. And with respect to your book, I feel that it is good since it has love, drama, mystery and I must add good aesthetics too. I really like your aesthetics you have put in a good effort, it was easy for me to have a well built-up sketch of your characters. In all, I think you have done a good work without many grammatical errors and I hope that you continue writing and keep updating.
