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Firstly, I must say that the title is really bang on! The name itself has a certain aura that spellbinds you with its hot seduction, unraveling mystery and gripping thriller. The same can't be portrayed by the cover though, I can't exactly get the relevance of it with respect to your plot. The only thing that I could get from the cover is that it harbors an erotic and lustful idea of a Gold digger, which I think only signifies a very small part, when in fact your book is so much more than that, so I suggest you look for something mildly promiscuous than going for erotic right away.
Framing of the blurb is done quite adequately, I actually liked how you have smartly presented the excerpt as the body while ending with a perfectly intriguing synopsis that made me want to go ahead with your book. The fact that you have minimal spelling errors was a relief to go by, but I did come across some places where the text lacked the punctuation or had some grammatical mistake, I suggest that you use some sort of app for this, so that you'd be able to find them without having to read the entire thing.
The characters Anastazia, Noir and Cara, all three have distinct personalities which marches along well with their attitudes. Personally, I liked the uniqueness of your story, instead of picking up the stereotypical idea of women that we've all come to know, time and again with every novel, it was good to have something new and out if the box that stood out from all the others. I experienced that the writing style is a third person's point of view and while you have actually described a few emotions quite well, I couldn't really find myself connecting to your plot. Especially with the switches around the scenes, where the backstory of the leading characters was explained.
Overall, I can definitely say that you have a good potential in you with the way that you've created the web of exciting twists and cliffhangers. And damn! You've chosen some really amazing characters, though I would say that the amount of pictures that you have in the book reduces the professionalism of your writing, but if that's to help the readers with picturizing the whole thing, well... then I guess that's justified. Anyway, keep up the good work!
