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Honestly, I must say that I was drawn to the mystery of your title “His Filthy Lies” so it's a good choice, it makes you want to know what is in your book and the cover suits it pretty well, though it could have been a bit better but it doesn't let down your book so you've done a good job on that.
I must say your blurb is as absorbing as your story, it makes the reader want to know what's next, so a new thought as well as a good description and your blurb has it all what you need to keep a reader interested since it gives you an idea or hint which it should so good job here too.
The cliffhangers were well done too, I must say I'm impressed, this is your first book right? Done well trust me I wanted to know what's next at the end of every chapter. I liked the flow of your plot you have made it very intriguing for your readers and your aesthetics were pretty great, I liked them too!
I must say, I don't have many complaints about grammar according to me you have done it very satisfactorily. I am very fond of Italian stuff, so I liked the names of the characters, they suited well giving off sophistication. Italians and it's home language, I mean lines that you have put were well suited too, I'm not sure about their spellings but it was good according to me, though, I suggest check that again.
I also liked the factor that how bold you have been with the mature scenes and you have done a good job in writing them all. The description of your characters or scenes made me actually imagine that particular thing so well done!
I liked Diavono. Hot, cocky and bold billionaire with a devilish personality and with the aesthetics you have put, the level of imagination went pretty high up. I like the direction where your story goes as well as I feel somewhere pity for Evenora since she had to go through a lot but what's a book without a drama, huh? So, I am just saying that you did not let down your reader's expectation and I see you are writing other books too you should definitely keep writing!
