raynsslut's reading journal

valentina: marssella_

★★★
finished: june 21, 2022

i've seen on a couple occasions in wattpad books, where, every time the author does not have any idea on how to bring the story, they'd just throw a mafia and mix it up, and thought it's the most brilliant idea. i mean, on this book, specifically, it didn't turn out bad, but still. i was more invested in the story before she just gave the mafia plot. regardless, it is very focus on our two main characters, i mean i do really understand that this is their book, but the main reason why i don't usually pick an on going book is because i would forget who is who. but, with this book even though it only took me less than a week to complete, but i still find it strangely confusing when the author just mentions names so i don't really find some scenes intriguing. and also, i mean i'm glad that it did not bring their age as a problem as it is quite boring, but, i still find it weird when no one like not even a single person minded, considering everything! and after what happened to her on the business trip, i expected a more dramatic scene lol. honestly, i adore her relationship with her mom and sister! how she can be so open without even trying to hide anything is just amazing and i hope i can do the same! regardless, i still found this book very enjoyable and entertaining.