Rewrite The Star

CHAPTER 8 : ENCHANTING LOVE

"Attention, everyone! We've finally reached Magdeline. You may all rest now; we will be staying here for the night at this charming motel, Love and Lucky. Members of the Brokstorm guild, please follow Mr. Aaron to your assigned rooms," announced the leader, Gavin Neincat. "Before that, may I have a word with you, Mr. Keevin and Mr. Atlas?" he added. Both nodded in acknowledgment.

"Wow, are you a real elf?" Gavin asked with wide eyes.

"Well, don't I look like one to you?" Keevin replied with a hint of amusement.

"Please, don't be offended. It's just that this is the first time I've ever seen an elf," said Gavin, clearly fascinated.

"So, what's the reason for calling us, Commander?" Atlas inquired.

"Pfft, don't call me Commander, just Gavin is fine. Straight to the point—I wanted to ask if you two are engaged?" Gavin said, eyes twinkling with curiosity.

Atlas's face turned crimson as he stammered, "Well, uh..." Keevin quickly held his hand and said, "Yes, we are engaged," with a warm smile. Atlas blushed even more, his emotions overflowing.

Gavin smiled warmly. "Keevin Scarz the warrior, I look forward to working with you. And Atlas Lokeshore the mage, I'm equally eager to work with you. I'll take my leave now. If you need me, I'll be in room 08. Good night." With that, Gavin departed, leaving Atlas and Keevin standing there.

Keevin draped his arm over Atlas's shoulders. "Why don't we take a walk around the town before calling it a day?"

Atlas smiled, "Well, sure."

They strolled through the bustling town, taking in the lively market and visiting the famous Grace of Magic park. Hand in hand, they enjoyed the enchanting surroundings. "Wow, there's so much magical energy here," Atlas remarked.

"Yeah, I feel it too," Keevin replied. A bird suddenly landed on Keevin's head, prompting a child's excited shout, "Oh my God, it's an elf!"

"Hi there, what's your name?" Keevin asked with a welcoming smile.

"My name is Kristen," the child replied, touching Keevin's pointed ear. "And is that your partner?" Kristen asked, pointing at Atlas.

"Yes, he is," Keevin replied, smiling.

"Woah! He's really beautiful. You look like my Papa!" Kristen said, eyes sparkling.

"Well, haha, you're cute too, Kristen," Atlas replied with a beaming smile.

"Kristen!" a voice called out. "There you are, Kristen. I thought I lost you. Please don't wander far from me," said a middle-aged man in his late thirties.

"Daddy, can you take their picture? They look so good together," Kristen pleaded.

"If you say so," the father replied, taking out his camera. He snapped a picture and handed it to Keevin and Atlas.

"I'm sorry if my child caused you any trouble," Kristen's father said apologetically.

"Hey, it's okay. Have a nice day and thanks for the picture," Keevin said as they waved goodbye and walked away.

"I look so cute in this picture," Atlas remarked.

"Yes, you do," Keevin replied, and they both laughed. "It feels so warm," they both thought in their minds. After their stroll, they found a nearby restaurant and enjoyed a pleasant dinner. Once finished, they headed back to the motel to rest.

They met the receptionist and were given the key to room 17. Entering their room, they immediately laid on the bed, sighing and then laughing together. They hugged and playfully rolled on the bed. They stopped, with Atlas lying on the bed and Keevin hovering above him in a warm embrace. Keevin leaned in closer and kissed Atlas.

"Can we have a child, Atlas?" Keevin asked, his eyes filled with longing. Atlas's nose bled, and he was too stunned to speak. Keevin kissed his neck and said, "It's okay if you're not ready yet."

"Hey, it's not like that... ahh," Atlas replied.

"So, you do want a child," Keevin said, a mischievous grin spreading across his face. Atlas, too embarrassed to respond, pushed Keevin's face away. Keevin then lifted Atlas and pressed him against the wall. "Well, now you can't avoid my eyes!" Keevin laughed.

"You naughty elf," Atlas replied, and they both surrendered to their deep, passionate love.