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Royal Critique Work by GirlinMysteriousWay Story: Status: What are we? Written by @beenfanzoned
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⚜️TITLE:
-Yung title mo, napansin ko lang sana wag mo nalang "WHAT are WE?" ang title. Sana mas catchy pa diyan. Like, "STATUS?" kasi it's all about status, or anything catchy. Pero, I recommend to use the title "CONNECTION" mukhang mas catchy yun o di kaya "NO LOVE, JUST CLOSE" pwede rin yun. It depends on you, basta catchy sya. And before I forgot di pala sya connected sa story mo yung title na napili mo.
⚜️BOOK COVER:
-Yung book cover mo ay pangit or not catchy (sorry) pero I like the pictures. Sana palitan mo na yang cover ng story mo and the main problem is the fonts, your placing, and the style of your fonts, and the color of your fonts. I think your using photogrid sa paggawa ng book cover mo, am I right? Well, don't use it again. I suggest you to download some fonts in "Dafonts" o kaya pag hindi ka marunong gumawa ng cover, we have a cover shop here pero di pa sya nag-oopen. Pero meron naman diyang ibang cover shops. Pwede ka dun mag pagawa😊
⚜️DESCRIPTION/BLURB:
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-The story description is okay. Maganda sya. And yung may mha circles (yeah I know magulo sya haha) sana small letter mo nalang sya kasi yang word na iyan either noun or pronoun so please baguhin mo and that's not a period it's a coma so ang sunod niyan dapat ay small letter except kung name yan ng person, etc. And after the sentence you should put a period, tama yun. Pero dapat big letter na ang sunod nun sa may description. So that's all for the description😊
⚜️PROLOGUE:
- yung part na No Love, Just Close sana ang gusto kong prologue mo. But it still depends. Though, maayos naman ang prologue mo. But you chose na meron ng POV sa prologue. Wgad agad ang eksena, hindi maganda yun (sorry) mas maganda sana introduced first your main characters before anything else and sana nilagay mo sa prologue mo ganito.
