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Royal Critique Work by @ shnmiaaa / Royal Critic AneMia Story: The Human Bride of the Last Water King Written by: @keith_jhuztine
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⚜️TITLE:
The title is like of a korean drama I know. I won't state the title of it here in respect of your story. That korean drama has a story plot of having a human bride and having also a Water King character. At first impression, masasabi kong inspired ito sa korean drama na 'yon. You probably could consider changing the title because of its cliché vibe and it has a resemblance of another finished story. It will only look cliché and readers knowing the korean drama will not take interest. Readers will just have an impression of you copying a story of another. Sorry. But it's the obvious truth. That korean drama was even famous so it will be really known by most of us, madami pa namang korean drama addict dito sa Wattpad Realm LOL. In addition, the title is superficial. If you really plan to have this kind of story, na it shall be inspired of that story line then you should spice it up. Most especially the title. Change the title! Make it not look cliché and superficial. Think of a unique title that you think even is unique as well. :)
⚜️BOOK COVER:
For your cover with your story's idea it's okay naman. I am not a Critic that will really tackle further someone's book cover like i-explain na dapat ito na kulay; na dapat ganito na fonts at iba pang churvalo na 'yan na graphic editors lang ang may upper hand of knowledge *laughs*. Pero I can confidently say if a cover is not suited for a story and if the writer should really need to change for a better cover. And in your case po, I suggest to change the cover. I promote our graphic shop here :)
⚜️DESCRIPTION/ BLURB:
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Okay, now that's just the basic of all basic in terms of having ones description but I really think you're over-doing it here po. Tapos 'yon na nga, it's alike of that korean drama. I bet you've changed some things and scenes with it but the main idea or plot is still the same. Nasa iyon naman po kasi 'yon. Alam mo namang may inspirasyon sa story mo kaya atleast you could do now is to spice things up more... not little. It's very simillar kaya you need to atleast do this. Plus, you're giving too much information already here. Some informations here are much better if it's written in your chapters. You know for the story's development. Yes po, nakabox po lahat. I have remarks on each paragraph you have, so will you hear me out? :)
