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⚜️TITLE ๑
"Seatmate Wars"
-> Your title was written in your own way "that was Good!". It's unique, easy to memorize and speaks for your story outline but,
Seatmate Wars is not that catchy, yup it's unique for its own but I think you should change it for better.
Like for example :
*Rivalry* Enemies * and etc.
ʕ•̀ω•́ʔ
Try to pic another title for that , but it's just my opinion it's still your choice.
Your title is good, but its Complicated to use ( i think)
Plus it's not that catchy .. But unique (miyaneee...)
⚜️BOOKCOVER ๑
-> Your book cover shows 2 guys over 1 girl or 1 girl between 2 guys is it Love triangle or what?? If i base this with your story /Description and title it would be Confusing. You should state it clearly to your story .than focusing on One kind if Love for 2 person if it's Love triangle then clarify it to your Description.
And by the way the Cover is Beautiful but it just made me confused..
Try to add : *Classroom effect or at least IU and Luhan looks like having a fight on each other so it would be fit to your Title " Seatmate WARS". It suppose to had a little bit Action in cover, because the cover that you were using stating love triangle and not Seatmate Wars...
Fonts are all Good!, and Please, let your name shine too, I can't see your name clearly. Be Proud and Bold let your name noticed too ʕ•̀ω•́ʔ✧.
⚜️DESCRIPTION/BLURB ๑
-> "Sinong nag-aakalang ang dating Rivals ay magkakatuluyan sa huli?" - ( OhMY!!! you spoil your readers already- this is wrong!.)
*Who would read your story if they already knew your ending?..* Eliminate that please.
"All of us will probably go through the point that we will love someone? Yes or No?
*Hmm ... This part is kinda missing something.. try to add spice or instead try to use this :
-" Everyone probably go through the point that we will fall in love to Someone we never know. Probably to Someone who makes us Happy, Someone who's always so nice to us ,and Someone that we like and like us too.
