⚜️Batch 5: UNordinary

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Royal Critique Work By: @awesomeSTG/Critic Painite
Story: UNordinary
Written By: @MissReferee

Royal Critique Work By: @awesomeSTG/Critic PainiteStory: UNordinaryWritten By: @MissReferee

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⚜️TITLE:

The title was actually the very reason why I accepted your story, because it hooked me right away! Just judging from the title, one can really tell that the story isn't something cliché or has an obvious plot.

But one of the personal reasons why I was so attracted to the title was because it reminded me of a fantasy webtoon entitled UNordinary as well, kaya hindi ko na-contain yung sarili ko, haha.

⚜️BOOK COVER:

A girl in a black cloak... Hmm... There's nothing much to see in there except for the MC. And since you weren't the one who made the cover, I won't push this one further. I was just looking for something that might be used as symbolism. Also, is the genre really general fiction? In my opinion, pwede din kasi itong gawing mystery/thriller or paranormal.

If you want to, you can try our Princess Graphic Chamber you can check if it's open or not it's all up to you of you want too.

⚜️SUMMARY/BLURB:

Nabitin ako. Period. Aside from the grammatically incorrect and excessively short blurb, parang hindi din ito nakaka-speak sa mga readers, kasi nga sobrang iksi nito, at parang nawaste lang yung malaking chance to lure readers.

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