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Royal Critique Work by shnmiaaa / Royal Critic AneMia Story: Eyes on me Written by: @artificialwings
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⚜️TITLE:
It gets me. Your title choice po. It's like I could really tell that whoever this character is asking or is maybe desperate to have someone's attention. To have that 'Eyes on Me' as a title, it's really special. Nice choice of title po!
⚜️BOOK COVER:
Your book cover is just lovely and so lovely and just super lovely! Huhu. I could look at this all day LOL. I have never seen a book cover this beautiful before. Who ever made this is a total Graphic Editor God/Goddess xD Saktong-sakto kasi sa title mo ang concept at style ng book cover. Kudos!
⚜️ DESCRIPTION/ BLURB:
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You made it direct to the point. I like how you have your description. It's formal po. I like formal stories you see. Lol. Anyway, you focused more to this female lead in your description and hinted that this guy will help her out but despite everything, she's still uncertain about him. And that probably makes the story's bread and butter.
For a description, there's no need to change anything po. I already have an idea of your story and that's the right purpose of a description. That when a reader reads a description, they will be able to picture out the story plot.
⚜️PROLOGUE:
Just wow! I SUPER LIKE THE WAY YOU NARRATE! Napakahusay! I am carried away with your words and lines. Perfect usage of descriptive terms and I could literally imagine what you narrated. I didn't even notice that I was already on the end part of the prologue. I feel connected with your characters even if it's just my first time reading. May pagkakataon kasi na it takes a couple of chapters for a reader to feel 'connected' with the characters. And that's one rare feeling a reader would get in a story. It just means... that the author is effective. The prologue was Stella or Star and Jay's very first not to mention a fateful encounter. It may didn't start good but with Jay's seemingly positive but playful personality it gets to the point that Star— the problematic lead still considers to maybe see Jay again. She somehow felt comfort with him in a short time and that's a good start. Magaling! Ang galing n'yo po. Gosh! I'm already in love with the prologue. I'm already in love with Jay kahit prologue pa *laughs*
