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Royal Critique Work by @shicekizean Story: Stellar Lucifer Written by: @awesomeSTG
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[ TITLE ]
- Your title seems good to me. As of now, hindi ko pa nababasa 'yong story mo but upon seeing the book cover and the magical-ish title, I am assuming it's fantasy. This is the first time I've read a title like yours, but don't worry, I think it's unique naman. 'Di ko kasi thing na magbasa ng Fantasy books so I'm not really sure. But! Your title seems to push me on reading your book, so yay!
[ BOOK COVER ]
- As a romance writer, I always like my book covers neat or without so much colors. But of course kapag fantasy ang genre ng isang book, I won't expect the cover to be simple because that wouldn't give me the fantasy vibe. I am giving a thumbs up for the cover! The main subject is on point. The purple colors and the font made it look awesome. I loved it. ❤
[ BLURB/DESCRIPTION ]
- Wow. It's very good! It piqued my interest from the first word down to the last. Excited na tuloy ako, haha. It was like reading an anime summary... giving me a fantasy-anime vibe. Kudos! I love how you played with words, about how you managed to write a blurb without giving in too much information, but rather giving us enough information just for us to be curious. It isn't long nor short, and it's fine as it is!
[ PROLOGUE ]
- Oh my gosh it's amazing! Sa unang part pa lang, nakita ko na nang malinaw 'yung scenery ng sinulat mo. Smokes, ashes, the ship's debris. I can even almost see them with dirty faces and torn clothes. XD Nagpasok ka na rin ng characters. Although hindi ko sila maaalala agad-agad, feeling ko kilala ko na kanya-kanya nilang personalities. I also love the MC na. I'm looking forward to read more!
The prologue was enough to really catch my interest. May idea na 'ko sa story mo - it'll be really chaotic. But exciting. I'd like to contradict your blurb saying that your story is 'non-exciting'. 😛 I can sense things will be hella awesome.
[ book content ]
• Chapter 01
- It's a good start. A high school boy who had been having a bad dream, a weird Dad, a scholar and he is bullied. Sa prologue, galit na galit siya sa mga tao - but I hope sana naman hindi bullying ang reason no'n. XD I don't know, I'll find it shallow if it is.
Sa first chapter ang dami na agad tanong na dumapo sa isip ko (which is a good thing) like, bakit gano'n pakikitungo niya sa Papa niya? Hindi naman masama, pero parang ilap siya? And why is he calling his father on his first name? May kinalaman ba 'to sa curse na dala nila or sadyang awkward lang siya pagdating dito? Paano rin nasabi ng mga schoolmates niya na anak nga siya ng demonyo? I hope those questions have an answer. Tutal, first chap pa lang naman.
The main character is justified. Hindi pilit ang pagpapakilala sakanya. Naroroon ang emotions, ang maayos na point of view niya. I can compare him to the anime character Kaneki Ken, hahaha! Sa prologue, psychotic-ish siya, at nalaman ko rito sa first chap ang pinanghuhugutan ng character niya. Aylabit!
