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Royal Critique Work by shnmiaaa / Royal Critic AneMia Story: The Ghost's Angel Written by: @joaneveth
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⚜️TITLE:
The Ghost's Angel. Two unseen entities. Two leads that only sees each other. There's nothing wrong with your title choice and as I read the whole story I really find it common but despite this it was cute and adorable.
⚜️BOOK COVER:
I like your cover. Nagandahan ako at wala na akong iba pang masabi. It's just so nice! Great choice of book cover! It would be even better to include Cheonsa? To include an angel-like girl there in the cover? The title is 'The Ghost's Angel' meaning the main story will really be about the Angel of this Ghost. Possessive term kasi may apostrophe sa Ghost. You understand what I mean? Pero okay na rin ito. Maganda pa rin po ;)
⚜️ DESCRIPTION:
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Your description. Like what I said. It's common and I don't see anything special but the way you write this really hits the mark to your reader to the point that as they read your story parang nasa mismong story talaga sila. Just like what I feel. Good job despite the common plot! I mean it.
⚜️ BOOK CONTENT (1 chapter only)
Despite being a one shot, you made it clear and precise. Fast pacing pero you made it sure to only include the important details making it so 'malaman' and not 'sabaw'. I actually like how you write this— malinis kasi pero may nakita lang akong isang mali mo. Hindi mo alam paano gamitin ang 'ng at nang' sa technicalities na 'to natin pag-usapan at ito lang naman, e. Ang 'cons' lang sa story na 'to is its common plot but despite of this you really wrote it very well making it interesting to the readers plus the fact you used EXO's Kai. You'll surely lure or attract readers that are Kai's fan. I have to admit, this tactic is very trendy especially most wattpaders here now are fangirls of kpop lol.
⚜️ CHARACTERS:
The whole story revolves to the two leads. Excellent way of portraying one's characters traits. Pansin kong Pro ka na dito. Wala ng dapat pang-i-tackle.
