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Royal Critique Work by @GhostForReal / Royal Critic Lyn Story: Herald of Armageddon Written by: @Bimaia
TITLE
Ang unique ng title mo. It's good because it catches the readers' curiosity and interest.
Herald of Armageddon Herald means announcer or messenger and Armageddon means the place of the final battle between evil and good. So I assume that your story will be about the messenger of the final war.
Connected naman sa story mo if sinabi na messenger of the final war kaya lang I think much suitable iyong first title mo which is "Ruler of Armageddon". I think the girl is not just a messenger or an announcer. Sa lakas niya naman ay hindi siya basta lang messenger. She will completely rule it, I guess.
BOOKCOVER
The font of your book cover is great. Sumakto talaga kasi it's bloody tapos parang iyong weapon kadikit doon sa letter h.
On the other hand, the background gives a creepy vibe. But the story is not horror. So, I suggest change it into a picture of destruction or war since the title has Armageddon in it.
Like this examples,
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