Part-336

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Okay this note is to say. Before chp 335 when Manan were fighting I got so long and many number of comments.....but just when Manan got a little bit not so romantic comments got the shortest as possible.......fantastic. I m deeply hurt. Anyways......I m going to write that only that I have decided and let me inform you I have changed my track too.






Manik started strumming his guitar completely focusing on Nandini and when their eyes met Nandini turned around breaking their not an actual eye lock but Manik was determined to sing and he sang.





Kacchi doriyon, doriyon, doriyon se
Mainu tu baandh le
Pakki yaariyon, yaariyon, yaariyon mein
Honde na faasley



Hearing his soulful voice and the words made Nandini realised her abt their Dehradun trip. How he sang, when and where. All his gestures and cute antics that he did before and after singing.




Eh naraazgi kaagzi saari teri
Mere sohneya sunn le meri
Dil diyan gallan



With this voice Nandini could feel the desperation in him but she was hurt enough to forgive him so easily.





Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu milaa ke
Dil diyan gallan haaye


Cavya had left the stage long back when Manik was strumming the guitar. Each and every person in the hall were in another world on hearing Manik's voice but nobody could understand his feelings in his voice.




Karaange roz roz beh ke
Sacchiyan mohabbataan nibha ke
Sataaye mainu kyun
Dikhaaye mainu kyun
Aiven jhuthi mutthi russ ke rusaake



Nandini moved away from his sight behaving as if she was busy in work but she heard each and every word of his even though that song was by heart to her.




Dil diyan gallan haaye
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke





Tenu lakhan ton chhupa ke rakhaan
Akkhaan te sajaa ke tu ae meri wafaa
Rakh apna bana ke
Main tere layi aan
Tere layi aan yaaran
Naa paavin kade dooriyan haaye




Tenu lakhan ton chhupa ke rakhaan
Akkhaan te sajaa ke tu ae meri wafaa
Rakh apna bana ke
Main tere layi aan
Tere layi aan yaaran
Naa paavin kade dooriyan





At one point Nandini went away from there and came in kitchen as tears were threatening to spill from her eyes. She was controlling herself. Manik thought that she left away but little did he knew that speakers were placed in kitchen too and she could clearly hear him infact more clear than in living room.





Main jeena haan tera
Main jeena haan tera
Tu jeena hai mera
Dass lena ki nakhra dikha ke
Dil diyan gallan
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke
Dil diyan gallan




Manik continued singing as he had to complete the song plus he kept singing with a hope that maybe Nandini was hiding behind any pillar or curtain and was hearing him.




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