This is my first story, so please give me constructive criticism. I would appreciate that. I only wrote this story because I can do what I want with my life, and because I felt like it. =p These characters are owned by me and the story. But not every character is owned by me, those will be borrowed with permission. I don't know yet, but I might make a series out of this. Well, I hope those who read it, will enjoy it.
BTW, this story will be restricted, but its action, no adult content. It's usually not the writer's fault that some parents don't monitor what their kid/kids do."Alue!" My brother, Dean, knocked on my door. "Come in..." Dean walked in and set my uniform as I slowly got up. "What's up, Dean?" "Today; mission. Leader wants to talk to you." "Ok. I'll be on my way." Dean walked out of my room and I changed my clothes, preparing for the mission. Dean is a really good guy, for an adult. He took care of me and is like a big brother to me. He has a unusual green eyes, red-brown rusty hair color; which suits him, tan skin and is twenty-five years old. I have golden fire eyes, black hair, a light tan skin color and eighteen years old. The minute I stepped out of my room, I saw familiar crimson eyes. "Sup, morning, Alue." Shade smiled at me. I smiled back. "Morning, Shade. We have a mission." I am socializing, but usually to my friends. "Indeed, you do." Astoroth said. He is the leader... "Can you gain encrypted information from SET 19?" I nodded. "Yes. May I ask what is it for?" Astoroth had a slight trace of hatred towards me. Then he remained calm. That was the first clue that something was unusual. "Um...yes, sir, I shall do my best to retrieve the encrypted information. "He slightly sneered at me. "Perfect. Don't disappoint me..." I shook my head. "You have my word, sir." "I hope so, Alue...you may leave." My team and I nodded and left to the equipment room and prepared ourselves. "Shade?" I glanced at him. He looked back at me. "Yes, Alue?" "Can you start the car? I will get the ammunition." I walked to the weapons room. Shade nodded and we went to the opposite directions.
Shade's POV
I was connecting a few cables when suddenly, I turned to look who might have been behind me. Nothing or no one was there. Weird, I had the awkward feeling that someone is watching me. Whatever, I just went back to what I was doing. Ok, now I felt someone tapped me on the back of my neck. What the heck? Again, No one in sight when I turn around. Hmm...I'll just act this out. Walking like not knowing anything, someone or something made a rustling noise. I followed where the noise came from, I peeked through the bush and nothing was there. That is, until a certain friend screamed into my ear, making me scream like a girl and accidentally punch him at the nose. Then we both screamed.
"What the heck, Shade!? You could've broken my nose! It hurt like that time my tail got hit by a hammer!" My feline friend, Akio, groaned in pain while being on his knees and covered his nose with his hands, hoping it would heal the pain a bit. "If you didn't surprise attack me, I probably wouldn't have punched you by accident." I suppressed a laugh from what I did to him. "There you go! You said 'probably wouldn't have punched me by accident'. You should've seen the look on your face!" He began to laugh. "You shrieked with such a high pitch!" I stared blankly at Akio. "You know, I don't regret accidently punching you. Now, c'mon, lets get your nose fixed. We have a mission..."
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RandomI made up these characters, and this is my first story to write. So please give me constructive criticism by email. I hope you all enjoy.