Hi guys!!
I just wanted to ask for feedback, opinions and where you want this story to go.
This story isn't even CLOSE to being finished.
We are looking at 40-45 chapter in total and I want to know what you want to see more off, less off ANYTHING.
what do you think of Blake?
Trust me when I say your going to see more of him
What do you think of Brittany?
She's a stereotypical queen bîtch and I'm thinking that when I edit, I'm going to give her motive and make her character more clear.
What about Danny and Faye's relationship?
Its really CHEESY right now but I'm working on making a better basis for it.
Honestly, when I first started this book I was flying blind on characters and what they're would be like.
All I knew was that I wanted to right about abuse in honor of my friend who passed away because she suffered silently for years.
And I wanted to honor and inspire those struggling with depression and self harm, like my friend Mary (not her real name, it's a private joke) You give me hope, don't give up please.
Now it's turned into the project that I love, that I'm in love with these characters and I want every body to get my message.
So PLEASE! Anything, feedback, opinions. I can take hard critics.
Vote, comment share.
~Jana
NOTE: self harm is not necessarily sucidal behavior.
If you struggle with any of the following, then I know it's going to take a lot more than telling you you're beautiful to make you better but YOU ARE GORGEOUS. you. And I love you. I don't care if you're weird or alone or scared. Think of you as a little kid. Who was that kid? What did he and she want? Become that kid again.
Here are some hotlines if your ever in trouble!!
Cyberbullying
Bullying UK (UK only)
0808-800-2222
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.bullying.co.uk
Crisis Call Center
800-273-8255 or text ANSWER to 839863
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://crisiscallcenter.org/crisisservices.html
CyberTipline
800-843-5678
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.cybertipline.com
Kids Helpline (Australia only)
1800-55-1800
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.kidshelp.com.au
Kids Help Phone (Canada only)
800-668-6868
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.kidshelpphone.ca
National Suicide Hotline
800-SUICIDE (784-2433)
800-442-HOPE (4673)
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.hopeline.com
National Suicide Prevention Lifeline
800-273-TALK (8255)
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.suicidepreventionlifeline.org
Thursday's Child National Youth Advocacy Hotline
800-USA-KIDS (800-872-5437)
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.thursdayschild.org
The Trevor Lifeline (U.S. only)
866-4-U-TREVOR (488-7386)
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.thetrevorproject.org
Your Life Iowa: Bullying Support and Suicide Prevention
(855) 581-8111 (24/7) or text TALK to 85511 (4-8 PM every day)
Chat is available Mondays-Thursdays from 7:30 PM-12:00 AM
http://www.yourlifeiowa.org
Depression
Crisis Call Center
800-273-8255 or text ANSWER to 839863
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://crisiscallcenter.org/crisisservices.html
Depression and Bipolar Support
800-273-TALK (8255)
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.dbsalliance.org
National Hopeline Network
800-SUICIDE (784-2433)
800-442-HOPE (4673)
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.hopeline.com
Crisis Center and Hotlines Locator by State
http://www.suicidepreventionlifeline.org/getinvolved/locator
Suicide Prevention Services Depression Hotline
630-482-9696
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.spsamerica.org
Thursday's Child National Youth Advocacy Hotline
800-USA-KIDS (800-872-5437)
Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week
http://www.thursdayschild.org
Your Life Iowa: Bullying Support and Suicide Prevention
(855) 581-8111 (24/7) or text TALK to 85511 (4-8 PM every day)
Chat is available Mondays-Thursdays from 7:30 PM-12:00 AM
http://www.yourlifeiowa.org
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The Golden Boy's Girl {Complete} {undergoing SEVERE editing}
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