Chloe's Book Reviews {CLOSED/ HIATUS}

The Legend Of Hades (Book One)

Author: @qweenamanda

Chapters: 5 chapters (You asked for 10, but I will explain in the character development)

Genre: Werewolf

Specific: None

Book: yes

Cover-

Your cover is quite nice. One thing I would suggest is to dedicate a chapter inside your book to the achievements and awards you have won. Otherwise, the stickers block your lovely cover and they aren't clear to see. You might as well show off your stickers and get people to appreciate them in a chapter. (This is just my opinion though)

Blurb-

Your example...

"Your story has not been told that's why it's called a legend."

I feel like there should be a comma in the middle of the sentence where there is a natural break.

My suggestion...

"Your story has not been told, that's why it's called a legend."

What do you think?

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Your example...

"when a white wolf meets a black wolf they will mate and turn into lycans and gods of werewolves and become what the world has never seen before".

There should be a capital for "when" "lycans" should be capitalised as it's a noun I think there is an extra space between "werewolves" and "and" I believe there should be a comma inserted between "wolf" and "they" The full stop should be inside the quotation marks. I hope this helps.

Here would be my suggestion...

"When a white wolf meets a black wolf, they will mate and turn into Lycans and gods of werewolves and become what the world has never seen before."

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Your example...

"Could this Legend be true ?"

You just need to make sure there aren't any unwanted gaps between words and punctuation.

My suggestion...

"Could this Legend be true?"

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Your example...

"Find out in legend of Hades"

I know I'm being picky, but I know some contests pick up on things like capitalization.

"legend" just needs to have a capital L. There should also be a full stop after "Hades"

My suggestion...

"Find out in Legend of Hades."

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I don't really understand why you split the blurb into sections with kisses. A suggestion would be to find a divider or to use an asterisk. The kisses make it seem a little informal and I can't see the relevance to the book.