So I am rewriting this story and the beginning of the sequel. I want to make the first story a little better. I might change some things around to spruce up the plot. Give me some ideas to make it so much better

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Soccer vs problems
FanfictionYour a high school soccer star. You have a bright future ahead of you when the USWNT comes and watch your game. They think your amazing and talented player. Meanwhile, with your family your mom is ill, your dad is not aloud around you, and your bro...
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So I am rewriting this story and the beginning of the sequel. I want to make the first story a little better. I might change some things around to spruce up the plot. Give me some ideas to make it so much better