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It's me. The author, coming at you again with another chapter that isn't part of the story.
"Damn bro, just write the story."
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Anyway, hi.
So, there's actually a couple things I want to address here. You can probably ignore this if you want too though. Nothing too story significant. Though I would really appreciate it if you at least skipped to the end and read the thing there. I have a question for you all.
First off on the list:
I kinda hate the beginning of this. I feel like too much is riding on pre-existing relationships. (Guy named pre-existing relationships: :0)
Like, I have an idea on how you interact with the Disassembly Drones, but I don't have good times to show it because something else is going on that is a far more pressing concern than bonding time.
You and N have a father son kind of relationship. You and V are goobers. You and J care about each other but still also hate each other. You and Tessa have kinda an idea what your relationship is but both of you aren't sure and it's a whole thing.
2: I also want different bits about the drones. I want them all to have a bit more personality, but I'm not sure how to show it without it seeming forced.
V is really good at instruments. J is really good at math. (Or something. not finalized. She seems like she'd be good at math.) And I really like the idea of N being terrifyingly strong, but he doesn't really use it. Like, N doesn't really fight a lot, but he can throw anyone around like a ragdoll if he wants to. Solver Uzi took down V without too much of a hassle, but if she was fighting N and he was really fighting back, even a beefed-up Solver Uzi wouldn't stand much of a chance.
I feel like, because of their connection to Cyn, the Disassembly Drones are sort of solver resistant. I don't think we even see The Solver directly used on the DD's? V gets stabbed a bunch by Doll during prom, but she was never actually directly grabbed. Neither was N. So, Solver Uzi wouldn't be able to just grab him, meaning she wouldn't stand a chance against a serious N.
Your solver is built different. You're the creator so you can grab things like the DDs, or Uzi because Doll couldn't but you're better.
3: There's actually something else I was thinking about. I was using songs to try and develop personalities, but that's hard actually. Someone like Uzi, I need like, 5 songs for. You have a ton, everyone has a ton and it's a lot to deal with. Some things have bled through, a couple of ideas I wanted to use didn't end up making it in anywhere.
So, I wanted The Solvers actions to sorta be based off of this.
The feel of the song is what I was going for. The Solver HATES you more than anything, so it whispers in Uzi's ears, calling you a liar. I didn't get to fit it in anywhere, but I wanted too. I'm thinking about rewriting a bunch of this, BUT I will finish it first. And I WILL be finishing this.
Then there's something that did kinda make it in (please listen to the seizure warning if you are prone to that.)
Yeah guess what this was the basis for.
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This comment is sort of the vibe I was going for with Doc. I didn't quite get in what I wanted, but it was good enough for exposition purposes. Like I said before, if I dive into your past a bit more, then I'll put in more stuff like this.
AND THEN there's some stuff I want to do with N. I'm going to explain it here because I don't know if I'll be able to put it in. I actually have an idea I'll put a thing after this.
I want N to have an internal conflict about not truly feeling alive and complete and Uzi and you can help him through it. I could put it in after showing just how powerful he is. Have some ideas cooking in the oven, just need to not forget.
Sooo I was just thinking, I could do "side stories" that take place at an undefined time, which I can use to show some of the thing's I'm thinking about. What do you guys think about that?
Random kinda oneshots which take place in this story, and will hold some significance, from other characters perspectives. Uzi, N, Tessa, V, and hopefully J would all get at least one.
Please let me know I beg you.
Just wanted to have this here to put some new stuff on the table. Any input is appreciated!
