The Favorite // Dance Moms Fan Fic

Brooke's Turning Point (s2 e3)

FYI guys I'm gonna add a couple new ppl to the candy apples for the storyline sometimes

Alessia's pov
"Girls come on let's go" Miss Abby yells as we all come in the studio. "Let's have a big round of applause. I think we made applesauce don't you? Now the group won. They won the overall. But you know what, that was one competition. This week we are going to Starbound in New Jersey. We walk into Starbound you need to be those national champions." Miss Abby says before starting pyramid

"Alright on the bottom Nia, simply because of the mistake in the choreography. And that dance was easy. It's simple. Next Kendall. You need to learn to read music and you need to learn to hear the music. Im going to keep her on probation. Until I hand her that jacket she's still proving herself. Paige. I've seen you do the press better. Im giving you the benefit of the doubt. I thought you did a nice job. Next Hannah. You were great at the end but it was only a small part. Next MacKenzie. This week both you and Hannah are not in the group. You are going to do a duet together." When Miss Abby said that Kenzie and Hannah hugged each other

"Alright next I have Maddie. You were the second highest scoring number in the entire competition, why do you think you're not closer to the top? I want you to stop resting on your laurels. I want you to keep improving for the next twenty years. Not for one competition. Do you understand? So you impressed them. Now I want you to impress me. Next Alessia. Same with you however you got the highest score in the competition that is why you're higher up. Keep improving you two" I was surprised when Miss Abby said this but it's ok

(Author: I usually only write what's in the show for like solos and duets etc but a lot of the time the girls have unaired dances so I might start writing those in too)

"Next, I have Chloe. Chloe you didn't do a solo last week you were great in the group, people are recognizing you from the video. But I want them to recognize you from your dancing. Understood? And on top of the pyramid this week, Brooke. You went out there, you proved yourself. You went from worst to best in one week. You're the oldest person in this group, you need to be the role model and that needs to continue."

Then Miss Abby went to the dancing
"Mackenzie and Hannah your duet is called magic. Mackenzie you are the magician and Hannah your the little bunny that's going to come out of the hat. Speaking of that Melissa, Aria we need a big hat for a prop. One that Hannah can fit in. Now Maddie this week you are going to be doing a jazz routine to lights, camera action. Chloe you're going to be doing a lyrical routine to don't catch me."

| Things are going to be a little bit different this time. Maddie and Chloe will be going head to head. So there's a lot at stake. Now lucky Ale she's all alone | Abby Lee Miller

"Chloe's so happy she's having a lyrical solo" Maddie says and we laugh a little

"Now Alessia you will also be doing a solo. It is a fun lyrical acro solo called rainbow" Miss Abby said and I was just super excited

"Now the group dance that everyone is in except MacKenzie and Hannah is called Born to Dance. It is a bout a child being born. There's a little mystery to it. Brooke you are going to be featured in this number, but you should be the glue that's holding it together and Maddie and Ale have been the glue that's holding it together. You need to be the most advanced one in the group not looking around to see what these two are doing. Understood? Brooke, don't let me down. Moms please go. Girls stretch out let's go." The moms and Kenzie and Hannah leave while Maddie and I go to the front to lead stretches

Five days to competition

We were learning the group dance and I liked it so far