TYPE OF REPORT: Event Report
[singer] Visits Our School
Introduction
The aim of this report is to discuss the talk [singer] gave at our school last Friday by highlighting its positive and negative aspects as well as recommending ways the speech could be improved for next year.
Positive Aspects
According to many students, [singer]'s speech was very inspirational as she spoke about her career and the difficulties she faced. She spoke about the importance of hard work and determination, which motivated us. Furthermore, she even sang some of her most popular songs, which made everyone appreciate her visit. As a result, we had lots of fun!
Negative Aspects
It has also been mentioned that [singer]'s talk was too long and tiring as she shared a lot of unnecessary details about her personal life and experiences. Hence, many students lost interest. Moreover, she did not provide any advice to budding artists on how to improve their singing skills. Therefore, many students were disappointed.
Recommendations
All in all, [singer]'s talk was a wonderful opportunity to motivate students to set a goal in life. However, I would recommend next year our school provides some guidelines to the speaker regarding what topics we would like her to cover and how long she should spend speaking about them. That way, everyone will be able to benefit from her visit.
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