(Slow Updates) The forgotten Luna...or was it Alpha?

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Jacob's POV

I looked up.  Her blue eyes were partially open.  Storm half smiled.  "Hey."  She said.  I smiled, still holding her hand.  I lifted her hand up slightly, kissing the back of it.  "Hey."  I said thankfully.  Storm looked around.  "What happened?"  She asked softly.  I moved closer to her.  "You passed out.  We're in the I.C.U."  I told her. 

Storm nodded slowly.  "I'm sorry..."  She whispered.  I shook my head.  "There's nothing for you to apologize for."  I told her gently.  Storm looked away.  "I'm always making you and everyone else worry."  She said.  I sighed and turned her head gently.  "We worry about you because we care about you."  I told her.  Storm half smiled.  She was okay.  If I ever found out who those rouges were, they were going to die.

Storm's POV

I felt Jake's mood change.  He was thinking of something bad.  Maybe it slipped his mind I could feel what he felt, even if it was slightly.  "Jake."  I sighed shortly.  He seemed to notice my change in tone.  "What's wrong?  Are you hurting?"  He asked, worried.  I half smiled at his reaction.  "Don't do anything that'll get you in anymore trouble.  I'll give Sarah permission to kick your tail again."  I threatened lightly.  Jacob laughed slightly.  "Okay, I won't."  He said, leaning over and kissing my forehead gently. 

I blushed slightly, only earning a chuckle from him.  That just succeeded in deepening the color of my cheeks.  The door opened slowly.  "They... wanted me to check on you since you didn't come back to say if you were staying Jacob."  A small voice said.  Eva sounded like she had been crying.  I was causing so much pain to so many different people.  "He hasn't come out becuase he's turing me into a tomato!"  I said in a fake annoyed voice.  Eva gasped lightly in surprise. 

"You're awake!?"  She said, in a voice that was slightly loud.  I whinced slightly.  "Yeah, and ow... loud Eva."  I said.  Eva covered her mouth for a second and walked over.  "Oops, sorry.  We were all so worried about you Storm."  She said with a small smile.  I smiled back, pushing myself up with one arm.  Eva looked worried before smiling.  "You still refuse to give up huh Storm?"  She teased.

I nodded.  "Yep.  Nobody is going to get the best of me again."  I said with a determined laugh.  Eva shook her head lightly.  "I'll tell the others you're up.  Even Cam has been worried about you."  She said.  That shocked me.  "Cam?"  I repeated.  Eva nodded.  "Yeah, he stayed here with Jacob most of the time."  Eva explained.  I looked at Jacob.  He nodded once.  "That's true.  But why?"  Jake asked.  Eva shrugged.  "I don't know.  He has been a little on edge since we got here.   That's out of the ordinary, even for him."  She said. 

I nodded.  "Yeah, Cam dosen't seem like the one to stay serious for too long."  I said.

Jake seemed to know who we were talking about, somewhat know at the very least.  I sighed and half smiled.  "Cam is the one that always makes a joke, even in the most serious situations."  I said.  Jake nodded.  "I figured.  He tried making a joke once, but I guess he gave up."  He said.  I rolled my eyes. 

"That's because you were M.I.A. Jake."  Eva said.  "The lights were on but nobody was home."  She added.  I laughed slightly.  "Did anyone else get hurt?"  I asked.  Eva took a breath.  "Yeah.  Seven warriors lost the fight.  A lot more were wounded.  Three pups have to find new families."  She said. 

I held my breath for a second.  Seven warrior deaths and three pups have lost their parents?  I thought.  That attack must have been pretty rough for everyone.  Sapphire replied.  I shook my head, shifting so now my legs hung off of the bed.  Jake moved to stand in front of me.  "What do you think you're doing?"  He asked quickly.  I huffed, annoyed.  "Making cereal.  What does it look like?"  I said back quickly.