Uncolored only because I don't want to ruin it completely.
My reference
Now let's point out the flaws
#1 The hair is off in many areas and isn't the right shape for a majority of strands.
#2 The left eye looks off compared to the really good right eye.
#3 I'm missing a few pieces of dirt under the mouth.
#4 The light shining though his hair is likely off in a couple places.
#5 The ear looks shriveled up.
#6 The point where the hair meets the neck is horribly wrong.
#7 The lines are too thin in a lot areas.
#8 His jaw is reachs down too far and should be corrected.
#9 The head lacks the proper angle the picture represents.
#10 The entire drawing is messy and has tons of erase marks.
#11 Proportions are off especially in the hair.
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Drawings from my Dear Sister
Random#234 in Random on 10/13/17 This a book to display the art my sister draws for me and occasionally my own. Home of the Artists of Wattpad which is collection of pages dedicated to showing off artists works and allow them more exposure...