Apparently I Can Draw #23 Jonathan Joestar

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Uncolored only because I don't want to ruin it completely

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Uncolored only because I don't want to ruin it completely.

Uncolored only because I don't want to ruin it completely

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My reference

Now let's point out the flaws

#1 The hair is off in many areas and isn't the right shape for a majority of strands.

#2 The left eye looks off compared to the really good right eye.

#3 I'm missing a few pieces of dirt under the mouth.

#4 The light shining though his hair is likely off in a couple places.

#5 The ear looks shriveled up.

#6 The point where the hair meets the neck is horribly wrong.

#7 The lines are too thin in a lot areas.

#8 His jaw is reachs down too far and should be corrected.

#9 The head lacks the proper angle the picture represents.

#10 The entire drawing is messy and has tons of erase marks.

#11 Proportions are off especially in the hair.

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