Whispered Promised by bib1233
Reviewer : the_lonely_pi
Cover: 3/5
The cover is decent, featuring a girl and boy imagery with a flowery border. It's not particularly striking but adequately sets the tone for a romantic storyline.
Title: 4/5
The title "Whispered Promises" is evocative and fitting for a romance novel. It hints at the intimacy and the broken promises that are central to the plot.
Blurb: 3.5/5
The blurb gives a good overview of the main characters and their dynamics. The contrast between Abhimaan's sunny disposition and Kavya's darker struggles is intriguing. However, it could be more polished to improve readability and impact.
Characters: 8/10
The characters are well-drawn, particularly the contrasts between Abhimaan and Kavya. Abhimaan is portrayed as a nurturing and loving figure, while Kavya is a complex character dealing with significant family issues. The supporting characters, like Sidharth, add depth and contribute to the main storyline effectively.
Plot: 7/10
The plot is engaging, with a mix of romance and drama. The initial setup with Kavya's family issues and her first day at university creates a strong emotional foundation. Abhimaan's instant attraction and protective instincts are well portrayed, though some parts feel slightly clichéd. The development of their relationship and the impending challenges keep the reader interested.
Grammar & Vocabulary: 3.5/5
The grammar and vocabulary are generally good but could benefit from more editing. There are some repetitive phrases and minor errors that interrupt the flow. Polishing these aspects would enhance readability.
Enjoyment: 4/5
The story is enjoyable, particularly for fans of romance and drama. The emotional highs and lows are compelling, and the characters are relatable. The mix of Kavya's struggles and the budding romance with Abhimaan provides a satisfying reading experience.
Summary
Overall, "Whispered Promises" is a compelling romance novel with strong characters and an engaging plot. While the cover is average and the grammar needs some polishing, the title and storyline will attract readers who enjoy emotional and heartfelt romances.
Total Score: 33/45
