Stories Vault by Izzah4972613
Reviewer: Gise_lliana
CHAPTERS READ: All
Cover and Title: 4.5/5
The cover was absolutely beautiful. The font placement as well as the font choice were excellent. It didn't fall short of any criterion and served it's purpose.
Story Vault is a good title. It is apt and is able to intrigue the readers. But there can be a more interesting title if you expand your research and find one.
Blurb: 2/5
The purpose of the book is the only thing mentioned. You could expand on your idea and add variety of other stuff to make it more interesting. That includes few quoted lines, idioms etc.
Plot and Structure: 10/10
The plot was rare and new. A very well crafted concept indeed. The execution was carried out wonderfully as well. I really loved the idea of the creation a humanoid.
Structurally the paragraphs were very well aligned and followed a proper sequence. Nothing really felt out of place.
Aesthetically, the overall vibe of the book was awesome. The well crafted Aesthetics gave insight into the depths of the character's personality. The only flaw was lack of verbal description which is an essential part of a short story.
Character development: 4.5/5
I absolutely loved the character development here. Though all seven of them turned into humanoids which resulted in them maturing but if we view from a realistic perspective it is what that happens usually with every being who turns an adult. The ending part where it is left as a question that were they really normal actually reflects on our real human behaviour making us ask ourselves that are we really alright but nonetheless we all strive to thrive.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 3/5
There are little to no grammatical errors which makes the story highly readable. There are occasional spelling mistakes which could be avoided by proper proofreading. Moreover there are perspective blunders which I feel is not intentional but rather an error. That could be eliminated with the help of rechecking the content and revising your content. There are a few awkward phrases as well. If you could work on them it will enhance it's Originality.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
It is a very good book and a highly recommended one fo those who love mysteries and science fiction.
Total: 33/40
