Recalling Affection by MadhuRikhayat
Reviewer : GiselleJaneZee
CHAPTERS READ: 10
Cover and Title: 3.5/5
The cover of the book is an essential part which is supposed to suggest about the world or the vibe of the story. It should be able to capture one's attention, in this case it fails to do so. The cover is not at all satisfactory and better fonts are required as well. In short, you need to work on the cover to achieve its purpose.
The title is very creative indeed. It is not only interesting but also captivating! Moreover, the relevance to the storyline is quite vivid.
Blurb: 2/5
Blurb begins wonderfully but the structure is lacking. It is in loose sentence format rather than proper paragraph. There are some grammatical and punctuation errors as well. Eliminating them can enhance the standard of the blurb.
Plot and Structure: 3/10
The plot is unique and creative but the way it is presented is very inadequate. The structure is not profound as well. There is no proper paragraphs. All of them are either in one sentence or too short. The quotation marks require attention as well.
Character development: 0.5/5
Character development is rather complicated. It is shown that the female lead Saga is suffering from alzheimer, but I feel you haven't studied the disease Alzheimer in depth before. About the lazer treatment, you mentioned that you made that up. But I would suggest you to read more about the disease as it is not doing justice to the plot.
It is more like, in one scene Saga suddenly remembers Jungkook and then in the very next moment they are back to square one. There is only display of two emotions in Jungkook. It is either the gratefulness or pain. Which keeps switching back and forth just like Saga's memory. Inshort there is no progress in their character development.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 0.5/5
The phrases and sentence construction is very poor. I dint understand why there are so many full stops after every sentence or rather words. If you're trying to make readers understand that there is a pause for a longer time or anything, you should use words to describe such situations. Full stops are excessively used. The short forms have been used for words like problems, you , you're etc. which creates a negative impact on the reader's mind. There are many avid editing mistakes therefore you should proof read the content as well.
Overall enjoyment: 3.5/10
The plot is something very unique, but the book lacks the basic details. The grammar is not upto the mark though sentence construction is still reasonable. There is a need for powerful vocabulary as well as good descriptions. Over all you need to work on alot of parts of the book to achieve it's purpose.
Total: 13/40
