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#186 Tales Of a Libra

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by xanabanana66x

by xanabanana66x

Tales of a Libra by @RLibra_

Read 4 of these because they were so short.

I love the organisation! Brilliant idea of having a contents page. Maybe add in the title that it's a contents bit because at first I was hoping for it to be a poem.

In the second poem there was a good choice of words at the start and this set the mood for the rest of the poem. That's how it should be done. :)

By the third, I was really enjoying the link you had between all of them (especially the bit with the age). I love how you make them intertwine like one story. Reminds me of Sarah Crossan.

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