One Heart and a Sea of Emotions by @Miyura_Mado form submitted by @Akiramado
Its/it's
I like the setting of the sea. It's unusual to get one like that on wattpad. I also liked how all the characters were tied together by the sea. Very neat.
Commas before names (especially in the parts where Ryota was addressing the captain).
Ellipses only need 3 dots.
More description of the killer would really enhance the writing and make it a lot more menacing.
Numbers spelled out in full look more formal.
...," isn't right. It's ..." only.
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