The Unbelievable Tale of the Adventure that Raised Me by @CitrusBooks
Some small typos but I pointed these out in the comments.
Good description - very vivid.
I would divide long paragraphs into shorter ones. They're a bit hard to read otherwise.
This book reminds me of one called the Faerie Forest.
Other than that, all good and I have nothing more to say. :)
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