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#225 The Four Year Sentence

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by xanabanana66x

by xanabanana66x

The Four Year Sentence by @KingsInspire

Great opening - I loved how you started in media res. It was really tense and gripping.

I mentioned in the comments about maybe leaving the question marks in the prologue blank to avoid confusion. I hope you get what I mean.

I'll tag you in a post where I explain how to format dialogue properly to others.

Liked the different POVs - I'm intrigued as to how they're all going to fit into one.

Apart from that, all good. :)

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